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docs/devel/writing-monitor-commands: Minor improvements

Avoid "JSON" when talking about the QAPI schema syntax.  Capitalize
QEMU.  Don't claim all HMP commands live in monitor/hmp-cmds.c (this
was never true).  Fix punctuation and drop inappropriate "the" here
and there.

Signed-off-by: Markus Armbruster <armbru@redhat.com>
Message-ID: <20240227115617.237875-3-armbru@redhat.com>
Reviewed-by: Eric Blake <eblake@redhat.com>
Markus Armbruster 1 vuosi sitten
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      docs/devel/writing-monitor-commands.rst

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docs/devel/writing-monitor-commands.rst

@@ -115,8 +115,7 @@ the bottom::
  ##
  ##
  { 'command': 'hello-world' }
  { 'command': 'hello-world' }
 
 
-The "command" keyword defines a new QMP command. It's an JSON object. All
-schema entries are JSON objects. The line above will instruct the QAPI to
+The "command" keyword defines a new QMP command. It instructs QAPI to
 generate any prototypes and the necessary code to marshal and unmarshal
 generate any prototypes and the necessary code to marshal and unmarshal
 protocol data.
 protocol data.
 
 
@@ -138,16 +137,16 @@ There are a few things to be noticed:
 3. It takes an "Error \*\*" argument. This is required. Later we will see how to
 3. It takes an "Error \*\*" argument. This is required. Later we will see how to
    return errors and take additional arguments. The Error argument should not
    return errors and take additional arguments. The Error argument should not
    be touched if the command doesn't return errors
    be touched if the command doesn't return errors
-4. We won't add the function's prototype. That's automatically done by the QAPI
+4. We won't add the function's prototype. That's automatically done by QAPI
 5. Printing to the terminal is discouraged for QMP commands, we do it here
 5. Printing to the terminal is discouraged for QMP commands, we do it here
    because it's the easiest way to demonstrate a QMP command
    because it's the easiest way to demonstrate a QMP command
 
 
-You're done. Now build qemu, run it as suggested in the "Testing" section,
+You're done. Now build QEMU, run it as suggested in the "Testing" section,
 and then type the following QMP command::
 and then type the following QMP command::
 
 
  { "execute": "hello-world" }
  { "execute": "hello-world" }
 
 
-Then check the terminal running qemu and look for the "Hello, world" string. If
+Then check the terminal running QEMU and look for the "Hello, world" string. If
 you don't see it then something went wrong.
 you don't see it then something went wrong.
 
 
 
 
@@ -201,7 +200,7 @@ There are two important details to be noticed:
 2. The C implementation signature must follow the schema's argument ordering,
 2. The C implementation signature must follow the schema's argument ordering,
    which is defined by the "data" member
    which is defined by the "data" member
 
 
-Time to test our new version of the "hello-world" command. Build qemu, run it as
+Time to test our new version of the "hello-world" command. Build QEMU, run it as
 described in the "Testing" section and then send two commands::
 described in the "Testing" section and then send two commands::
 
 
  { "execute": "hello-world" }
  { "execute": "hello-world" }
@@ -210,13 +209,13 @@ described in the "Testing" section and then send two commands::
      }
      }
  }
  }
 
 
- { "execute": "hello-world", "arguments": { "message": "We love qemu" } }
+ { "execute": "hello-world", "arguments": { "message": "We love QEMU" } }
  {
  {
      "return": {
      "return": {
      }
      }
  }
  }
 
 
-You should see "Hello, world" and "We love qemu" in the terminal running qemu,
+You should see "Hello, world" and "We love QEMU" in the terminal running QEMU,
 if you don't see these strings, then something went wrong.
 if you don't see these strings, then something went wrong.
 
 
 
 
@@ -246,7 +245,7 @@ The first argument to the error_setg() function is the Error pointer
 to pointer, which is passed to all QMP functions. The next argument is a human
 to pointer, which is passed to all QMP functions. The next argument is a human
 description of the error, this is a free-form printf-like string.
 description of the error, this is a free-form printf-like string.
 
 
-Let's test the example above. Build qemu, run it as defined in the "Testing"
+Let's test the example above. Build QEMU, run it as defined in the "Testing"
 section, and then issue the following command::
 section, and then issue the following command::
 
 
  { "execute": "hello-world", "arguments": { "message": "all you need is love" } }
  { "execute": "hello-world", "arguments": { "message": "all you need is love" } }
@@ -279,9 +278,8 @@ Implementing the HMP command
 Now that the QMP command is in place, we can also make it available in the human
 Now that the QMP command is in place, we can also make it available in the human
 monitor (HMP).
 monitor (HMP).
 
 
-With the introduction of the QAPI, HMP commands make QMP calls. Most of the
-time HMP commands are simple wrappers. All HMP commands implementation exist in
-the monitor/hmp-cmds.c file.
+With the introduction of QAPI, HMP commands make QMP calls. Most of the
+time HMP commands are simple wrappers.
 
 
 Here's the implementation of the "hello-world" HMP command::
 Here's the implementation of the "hello-world" HMP command::
 
 
@@ -332,17 +330,17 @@ To test this you have to open a user monitor and issue the "hello-world"
 command. It might be instructive to check the command's documentation with
 command. It might be instructive to check the command's documentation with
 HMP's "help" command.
 HMP's "help" command.
 
 
-Please, check the "-monitor" command-line option to know how to open a user
+Please check the "-monitor" command-line option to know how to open a user
 monitor.
 monitor.
 
 
 
 
 Writing more complex commands
 Writing more complex commands
 -----------------------------
 -----------------------------
 
 
-A QMP command is capable of returning any data the QAPI supports like integers,
+A QMP command is capable of returning any data QAPI supports like integers,
 strings, booleans, enumerations and user defined types.
 strings, booleans, enumerations and user defined types.
 
 
-In this section we will focus on user defined types. Please, check the QAPI
+In this section we will focus on user defined types. Please check the QAPI
 documentation for information about the other types.
 documentation for information about the other types.
 
 
 
 
@@ -463,7 +461,7 @@ There are a number of things to be noticed:
    member, it comes with a 'has_bootindex' member that needs to be set
    member, it comes with a 'has_bootindex' member that needs to be set
    by the implementation, as shown above
    by the implementation, as shown above
 
 
-Time to test the new command. Build qemu, run it as described in the "Testing"
+Time to test the new command. Build QEMU, run it as described in the "Testing"
 section and try this::
 section and try this::
 
 
  { "execute": "query-option-rom" }
  { "execute": "query-option-rom" }
@@ -532,7 +530,7 @@ option-roms" follows::
    Show the option ROMs.
    Show the option ROMs.
  ERST
  ERST
 
 
-To test this, run qemu and type "info option-roms" in the user monitor.
+To test this, run QEMU and type "info option-roms" in the user monitor.
 
 
 
 
 Writing a debugging aid returning unstructured text
 Writing a debugging aid returning unstructured text